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I wrote this article for my old site a while ago and now I'm opening my new site, I've redone it a bit.
Just thought I'd post it and hope someone would give me some criticism. Quote:
I think I still have room for improvement. I tried to make it informative but not too long, I don't want people to get bored with it after the first few lines when they see how long it is. Anyway, constructive criticism is appreciated. |
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Ur article is very good, and very accurate. I did suffer from anorexia (about a year ago). It started when I was 12!!! I wasnt even chubby, I was already a little underweight, but seeing models and super thin celebs influenced me. What happened to the years of Marilyn Monroe...a sexy size 16???
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I agree, your article was good, I felt fat so I tried to not eat... I only ended up eating more, so right now I'm just staying with my normal eating habbits.
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